Wednesday, January 21, 2009

freed freedom

An untied shoe string,
Freedom unsolicited
Will it be a trap?

2 comments:

Trinath Gaduparthi said...

Very novel idea of an untied show string. I finished the idea the following way:

Untied shoe string
Freedom or
a hindrance during the run?

Shamanth Huddar said...

wow!!!

amazing haiku!!!