Why do i love her?
I know she does not
Why do i hope to see her?
I know she'll not return
Why do i wish to be with her?
I know she'll never want me.
Why do I still check her scrapbook,
knowing she has nothing in there for me.
Why do I still answer her calls,
when its not but sarcasm.
'Cause for me she's another God,
Who did not find time to hear me pray!!
Listen
1 year ago
2 comments:
wow...loving so much that you give God's place had to be someone deserving
Good poem
Cheers
OMG. this was mindblowin'.. i mean, awesome!! was totally touched :-) wow man.. a real good work.. jus one more thing, the mentioning of God.. cud have been avoided.. maybe sumthin else.. cause i think, this tends to make the othrwise-mindblowin-poem a lil unrealistic and it gets a feel or bein "just" words.. if u knw wht i mean.. no offence. :-)
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