Saturday, September 01, 2007

euphoria, why?

Feeling high..
I am addicted
to this feeling
of a quirky pleasure

The ripples
wetting my feet
the splash
drenching me wholly

The rhythm
the repertoire
so sombre
I am in euphoria

I could make out the lyrics
they were words of hurt
Dropped in my mind..

The ripples
of pain were born
drenching me wholly!!


Dawn....सेहर said...

Hey...that was kind you took the reader through two different phases at a time...!
Amazing play with words...
keep going

INDR's Angels said...

i appreciate ur niche style of writing..
such a way of writing is rare and you make it so seamless , so vivid .